In 3/4 Time

I posted a new song to the email address. Tell me what you think. It's in 3/4 time, and I'll be damned if I was stone cold sober when I wrote it. No lie. But give it a listen, and maybe throw some melodies and bass lines into the mix.
Didn't bring my headphones today, so I haven't had the opportunity to check out the two new songs with bass. I'll bring them home and listen in the comforts of my shithole apartment.

Upsidedown Bang Spade U

liked the gift of magi song.. but i need to listen to it on a non-laptop... that is one (unlike the quiet yelloW) that i can see places to really flesh it out ... the yellow i dont konw.. it just sounds complete as is...
we need to get you a better recorded dude...
as for mother mary... big drums would help a lot.. use dynamics to build that illusion of momentum.. maybe mess around wiht the last chorus and verse? i dont konw.. is it even worth persuing the slow version of this? i personally like it but i htink i've been listening to it too much...

cunt it!

Song Comments

Magoi: I posted a new song in the email address as giftofthemagi.mp3 or something. It's a variation of Magoi. I took the chord phrasing and repeated that a bunch, then thought up a melody to throw on top. The lyrics are weak, so is my voice (".. my room is small ..") but I thought I'd record it just so I didn't forget how it sounded in my head.
MotherMary: I really like this song slowed down. Plus the melody was changed around a bit, which I thought was a nice twist. The problem is that Mother Mary has a shitload of momentum to the song, and when it's slowed down, that aspect disappears. Maybe it would fill up with bass and big drums behind it.
AnotherCreativeName: Sounds percussive, like the strings are being hit with a pen. I like it. Reminds me of when we went to that kid's house where Ryan's drums are stored; we jammed percussive pen style. Anyway, I'm gonna have to spend some more time listening to it to hear a melody come out. Maybe next week..
Keep posting random music, even if it's just a quick clip..